Jaag ke Kaati...
Raat ho chuki thi
Par neend ka dur tak koi pata nahi tha
Andhera itna ke ek saya tak nahi
Saath dene ko..
Itne mein
Ek jhonka aaya hawa ka
Aur ura le gaya badal ko
Thodi si chandni chhan ke aayi
khirki se
Aur aaine me apna aks nazar aaya
Socha do ghari apne akse se hi
Guftgu kar li jaye
Kehte hain aaina sach bolta hai
Par mera aks to bilkul shant nazar aaya
koi halchal nahi uske andar
khush nazar aaya apni zindagi se
Maine puchha,
"kahan mili tumhe itni khshi?
Mujhe bhi pata do wahan ka
Lagta hai jaise arsa ho gaya ho
muskuraye huye..."
Aur hairan ho gayi
Jab aks ne jawab diya,
"Tumse!jhaank ke dekho apne andar
tumhare dil ke ek kone mein
ek muskurahat
kab se tumhare labon pe khilne ka
intezaar kar rahi hai..."
Dhundh ke dekha to
wakai mein wo mil gayi mujhe...
Aur achanak
Roshan ho gaya mera kamra
Chandni se nahi,
Meri muskurahat se.......
Par neend ka dur tak koi pata nahi tha
Andhera itna ke ek saya tak nahi
Saath dene ko..
Itne mein
Ek jhonka aaya hawa ka
Aur ura le gaya badal ko
Thodi si chandni chhan ke aayi
khirki se
Aur aaine me apna aks nazar aaya
Socha do ghari apne akse se hi
Guftgu kar li jaye
Kehte hain aaina sach bolta hai
Par mera aks to bilkul shant nazar aaya
koi halchal nahi uske andar
khush nazar aaya apni zindagi se
Maine puchha,
"kahan mili tumhe itni khshi?
Mujhe bhi pata do wahan ka
Lagta hai jaise arsa ho gaya ho
muskuraye huye..."
Aur hairan ho gayi
Jab aks ne jawab diya,
"Tumse!jhaank ke dekho apne andar
tumhare dil ke ek kone mein
ek muskurahat
kab se tumhare labon pe khilne ka
intezaar kar rahi hai..."
Dhundh ke dekha to
wakai mein wo mil gayi mujhe...
Aur achanak
Roshan ho gaya mera kamra
Chandni se nahi,
posted by Minerva at 11:23 AM
7 Comments:
kitna sochti hai na tu.....par yaar har post sach kheti hai.... aur dil ko chhu jati hai....seriously yaar very true
ok . am here . jaag k kaati saari raina , vinod khanna was awesome , sizzling hot . in fact i think there is a raw sensuality about him and his sons - esp the younger one . sorry deviating , your poems nice too , but rahul khannna.....
Khub khub khub shundor.
Tomar kobita gulor best feature hochhe oder readability. Ar simple language yet very powerful visual imagery. Very good Minerva...keep it up. I specially liked the last lines the most.
jab chand na ho
chandni ki shor na ho
badal ki or me raat gehrati
andhereki ki kalak parchhai ko chhupati
tab hi shayad apne aapko sabse kareeb patein hein
shaant veeran andhereme
mahavishya ke ek chhoti si anu
apna astwitwa ko ek bar phir se mehsoos karta hey
kiya hey
kab
kaun
kise pata
wah wah! behtareen!
brilliant fare...why have you stopped writing??Its the only reason that we hold against this chaos...thanks for coming.
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Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be very good.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘fortress-of-minerva’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
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