Kuchh mang loon?
Socha hai mang loon kuchh aaj tumse…
Ek tukra badal ka
Kuchh boondein barish ki
Thodi si purvai
Or ek jhalak damini
Ek tukra badal ka
Kuchh boondein barish ki
Thodi si purvai
Or ek jhalak damini
Socha hai mang loon kuchh aaj tumse….
Barsaat ke sham ke saundhi si wo khushbo
Mez par rakhte hoye pyalo ki wo khanak
Tumhari banayi hui coffee ka wo aroma
Tumhari kavita ki do line
Or unhe kehta waqt tumhare ankhon ki wo chamak
Socha hai mang loon kuchh aaj tumse
Chhat pe tahlte huye tumhari wo tanhai
Aane wale kal ki chinta me tumhare mathe ki wo shikan
Mazi ke panno me chhupa hua kuchh yaadon ka wo dard
Or tumhari ankhon me ruke huye kuchh ashq
Socha hai mang loon ye sab aaj tumse….
posted by Minerva at 5:07 PM
7 Comments:
hey Smita.........real marvellous piece of work......'coz its so real & touching......maang loon aaj tumse......wo dosti ke hasein pal........wo nfc comm. centre jana......aur corns khana......this is for u :)
ey mangnewale
ye arz hey khuda se aaj meri
ki teri har mang dil me shayaa hone se pehle
daryaft kare ki jo mangi gayi woh maujood pehle se hey
Richa
Thanku thanku....aur haan tathastu! :)
Meghnaad
is qadar khoobsurat hoga jo dua mangne ka andaz e bayan to khuda bhi nahi thukra payega aisi dua! aapke in lafzon se char chand lag gaye hain!
Shukriya
good piece of work. but i think u should concentrate more on other subject except love.
Smita eta pore Gulzar er lekha sei "mera kuch samaan ..." er katha mone pore jachhe....
ota aamar one of the fav ...
etao visoon bhalo...visoon matured...ekebare moner govire chhuye jai....
~ Prakhar
maango kuch bhi maango, ek tukda aasmaan, ek mutthi hari ghaas, dene ko to bahut kuch hai, par apna sa kuch dena chahta hu.... (from the movie - paap)
kya baat hai, upar se neeche tak pada bahut achcha laga. some senti stuff some sensible.
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