SMILE
Sitting here on my own
completely immersed in my thoughts deep,
Taking a break from the hustle bustle
of the world thats moving fast and crisp.....
Lost in your thoughts,
Remembering the times we fought....
Because beautiful were the moments
When later on I cried
And you wrapped me in the warmth of your words
and gave me that assuring smile....
Remembering that smile makes me smile again
Siiting here on my own,I suddenly realise
that I am ready to face this world again
with a SMILE....
completely immersed in my thoughts deep,
Taking a break from the hustle bustle
of the world thats moving fast and crisp.....
Lost in your thoughts,
Remembering the times we fought....
Because beautiful were the moments
When later on I cried
And you wrapped me in the warmth of your words
and gave me that assuring smile....
Remembering that smile makes me smile again
Siiting here on my own,I suddenly realise
that I am ready to face this world again
with a SMILE....
posted by Minerva at 10:56 AM
5 Comments:
a smile can make you live
for a smile a dead can come alive
with a smile you can take the world
keep smiling -
As your smile can make one survive...
Beautiful.
Who is this dedicated to? :D
Very psychadelic, more like a pink floyd song lyrics, but first two paragraphs.But it would have been better if it had some good rhythm, because in a poem, that is always needed.
Liked the last 4 lines...but as tathagata said somewhr rhythm is missing.
~ Saikat
It's quite meaningful & very optimistic approach. If every one decides to face the world with a smiling face, I believe this world will be more colorful & we may live very simple.
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