Mahaz...
Kal raat
Ankhon me jo thehra tha
Mahaz boondein thi barish ki
Ya ashq the tumhare naam ke
Kal raat
Jo chhoo gaya hume
Mahaz nami thi hawaon mein
Ya ehsaas tha tumhare pyar ka
Kal raat
Phir yaad aaya wo manzar
Jab chal diye the tum
Hume mazil se mahaz ek rahguzar banake
Kal raat
Aksar ki tarah
Phir soch me par gaye hum
The kabhi tumhari zindagi mein
Ya mahaz khayal tha ye haseen
Humare khwabon ka…
posted by Minerva at 7:11 PM
8 Comments:
Nice grip over hindi and urdu. khub bhalobhabe moner gobhirer bhabna gulo, je bhabna gulo chironton ese gechhe. kintu bangla te kichhu lekha chai.
simply osadharon...pore ojosro elomelo bhab ese jai mone....khub sundor,khub sundor!
bhalo likhechis. good. keep it up.
khwabon ke tarannum se bune
ye mehez khwab nahi
kisike ke dil ki taron ko chhedte huye
ek haseen gazal simat-ti hui
Mehaz . . .
Mehaz ek shayari yaad dila deti hai
yaad dila jaati hai . . .
ek chota sa khwab, ek unkahi kahani Mehaz ek shayri ...
dil se
Bravo Smita, long way to go
Tathagata
dhonnobad! tobe banglay eto bhalo hold nei je! par ummeed pe duniya qayam hai :)
Rik
Oshonkho dhonnobad!tobe office e beshi bhab eshe gele mushkil ;)
Anonymus
Thank u! tobe identity ta reveal korle jante partam kake dhonnobad janachchi!
Meghnaad
bahot bahot shukriya is hausla afzay ka!
Anonymus
Mehaz ek dost ki tarif ne is shayari ko aur nikhar diya...shukriya!
Prothom a ekhane ashar age bhebechhilam Smita mone hoi kono essay, ba personal xperience ba bhromon kahini likhechhe....but ekhane eshe aami hatobak!
parer por check korlam "about Minerva" ...sure hote chailam etai Smita to!
khuuub bhalo, ebong jathestho matured lekha....
keep it up!
~Prakhar
Prakhar
Thanks....
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